Hello Everybody!!! Hope you all are doing well and keeping in good health. My today’s post is quite a bit different post. Yes because its a poem this time. This is my first ever attempt of writing a poem.
So here’s the poem –
How was it??? I am eagerly waiting for your reviews on my poem. Let me know in the comments below if you all would like to read more such poems from my side.
Do like👍 and please feel free to comment on my poem as I said its my first attempt and I am not a professional poetic so all I need is your suggestions your reviews pointing out all my positive points and flaws as that would help me to grow better. As I always say all your comments are always welcomed with open heart.
See you all soon in my next post till then Take care everybody😁😉.
Keep smiling everybody😊💖✨🌹
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Poem👌👌👍🏻
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Thank you so much dear 😁💖
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Excellent!
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Thank you so much😄
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The divine is in everyone and everything, 🌏🌎🌍🌐🗺🌝🌞
After the winter, comes the spring
Please everybody , repeat and sing ,
The bells of joy start to ring,
After the darkness of the night,
The glowing sun would shine bright ,
You do not have to hold on things all so tight ,
With the divine grace and love ,
All blessings flow to our sight ,
The divine would save us,
All ends well and what is right ,
Shall always fall into place ; despite ,
What we may or may not fear or fright ,
Divine grace is never ever finite ( unlimited )
To transform With all love and presence,
embrace and find a way with Godly spirit to really ignite …
God is here and there ,
existing everywhere
Dare to believe that love is fair …
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Wow beautifully written😁🙌🌻
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Amazing poem! Keep it up!
Btw I too blog @ The Confessions Of A Music And Book Addict and would appreciate some support!
Stay safe
-Prutha xoxo
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Thank you so much😄
Yaa sure I will check out your site🙌
You too stay safe!!
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Awesome poem! Thank you for posting it! Stay safe!
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Thank you so much
You too stay safe!!!
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One constructive suggestion and I do not claim to be a poet …
Make the sentences more musical and easier to say as if you are singing …
Expample in the second line
” Give me attention please ” I say it to all
My heart speaks for you all ,
With God , I am inspired and to you I call “.
The hardship is never too big to end
But it is never too small ,
neither to belittle nor to ignore ,
Be mindful of what you do and say ,
As human history could recall ,
similar things took place once and for all ,
Being more careful is our goal …
All are here to play a role ,
With God we are sacred and whole ,
Just relax and no need to control ,
Look at these words and through them scroll,
For us to be aware is the divine call ,
Build a bridge and the walls shall fall ,
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Wow magical words!!!🎆
Such a beautiful piece of advice I will for sure take care of this point for my further posts😄💐
Thank you so much for your kind advice!!🌼🌻
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Search on the internet about writing a good poetry …
Rehards …
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Was my first attempt good?
How much would you rate it on ten?
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I prefer not to judge or qualify.
Look at continuous improvement…
Keep up your shining light…
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Okay thank you so much!!
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masking
tasking
asking how why and when~
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Well written and thoughtful verse: nicely done! Thanks for the share…..
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Thank you so much😄💐
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This is so wonderful
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Thank you!!
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That is wonderful ✨👍👌 Have a wonderful weekend 🤗✨💐
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Thank you so much!!
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You inspired me to write …
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Thank you for such kind words!!!😄🌻
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😊🌙🏳️🌈✅🕉
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Excellent poem!
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Thank you so much😄💐
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You are a great poet too!!
Hm interesting 👍
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It was just my first attempt long way to go😁
But thank you I am glad you liked it!!
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nice
pls visit :https://motivational876013946.wordpress.com/2020/04/28/power-of-thought/
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Thank you!!
Yaa sure I will check it out
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Amazon poem!!
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*Amazing
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Thank you dear😄💐
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What is it about quarantine. Even I wrote a poem about it without thinking. Is it a disaster in making or do I have to wait for the ending. Great work 👌
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Lets be positive and stay indoors!!
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Woah that was accurate and amazing. So proud.💓
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Thank you so much😁
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💯
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😄
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I posted on mental heath check during quarantine check it out and maybe your suggestions can be taken into consideration . Come talk about your feelings and emotions in the comments .
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Yaa sure I will check it out
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Yes
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Ha… Good rhyming sir.. and meaningful as well.. ❣️💯
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Thank you but trying to bring this to your notice that there was a misinterpretation of she being he
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Oh.. I’m very sorry… I didn’t know.. 😬🙏
Nice blog.. keep writing more.. 💯
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No worries its alright!!
Thanks for reading my poem
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Also, I didn’t notice your pic.. Just now saw..
Have a great day..!
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Its alright
You too have a great day!!
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I liked your poem
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Thank you😄
I have written a poem on Mother’s day as well do check it out
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I will
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Yaa sure
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nice! check out my new blog and follow 🙂
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Yaa will check it out
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Very nice.Sweet, simple & meaningful!?
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Thank you😄
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Nice poem. Good thought process. Try wriing some more and see where you inner voice takes you.
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Thank you so much🌷
Yes sure!!!
I have written a poem on mother’s day as well do check it out😄
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http://aurumwrites.art.blog/2020/05/30/%e0%a4%ae%e0%a5%81%e0%a4%9d%e0%a5%87-%e0%a4%86%e0%a4%a6%e0%a4%a4-%e0%a4%a8%e0%a4%b9%e0%a5%80%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%a4%e0%a5%8b%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/
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I did checkout your blog you have recently started blogging for that welcome to the world of words
Can you be a little bit more specific dear??? so that I can help you out
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Yaa but how
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Refer to the help section of my page and let me know over there what kind of help you need from me
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Ok
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Were you able to find it out??? or should I help you??
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Just loved it
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Thank you
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Amazing..Hope you also visit my blog and give me some feedback as i am a beginner and your feedback matters me a lot!!
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Thank you so much😄🌻
Yaa sure I will checkout your blog soon👍
Since you are new to this environment if you need any help do let me know you can refer to the help section on my page I hope it would help you out😊
Do let me know in the comments of the help section😄👇
Happy blogging🌻💐
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thanku !!
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You are welcome!!
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You’re a very talented poet, Manjul. Keep up the good work.
I started blogging lately since I’m in quarantine. I lost my job 3 months ago and that’s when I discovered my passion in writing.
I feel like you deserve a recognition, so I’m nominating you for this award: https://asharsana.com/2020/06/11/the-original-outstanding-blogger-award-nomination/
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Thank you so much😄💐
Welcome to wordpress and all the best for your journey👍
If you need any help let me know do refer to the help section on my page for more information😄
And thank you for the nomination I would surely participate👍😁
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You’re most welcome, Manjul!
I found such friendly community on WordPress. Thank you for your wishes 🙂
I’ll definitely bother you for any help when I need 😉
I only nominate those who truly deserve recognition.
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Yaa sure😂😂
Thank you so much for your kind words!!
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Cool stuff !got a lot of tatics from your poem.. Stay safe ! And do check out my poem as well in my @does it really matters and your suggestion really matters
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Yaa sure I will checkout just send me the link of your poem😄
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https://gowiththeflowdotin.wordpress.com/2020/06/12/desert-of-life/
You should suggest how do I improve it further…
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Yaa sure!!
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*got a lot of tatics about how to write a poem from your work
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Nice 👌🏻
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Thank you😄
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WOW, great poem, I’d say that you need to keep writing poetry, you have a talent:)
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Do you maybe want to check out some of my poems (totally optional, no push)
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Yes yes sure why not😄
I will check out your blog soon😁💐
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Thank you so much😄🌻
I am glad you liked it😀
I have written a poem on mother’s day as well and will come up with a new one soon😁💐
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My first poem was nothing like this
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Appreciative poem!😊Hey I also blog @mypoetryframes…. will be glad to see u there..Stay home stay safe👍
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Thank you so much😄
Yaa sure I will check out your blog soon👍
Stay safe😊
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That’s a brilliant first poem of yours, Manjul! Hope you’re staying well these days.
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Yes thank you so much😄
Stay safe!!
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Awesome 😲👏
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Thank you🌻
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That’s marvelous 😳👏👏💖🔥
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Thank you😄💐
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